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Daring do temple of Chicomoztoc by zilvart
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Please understand that this is not meant to be discouraging or to attack. I am only trying to point the areas that need improvement in ...

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Daring do temple of Chicomoztoc by zilvart
Please understand that this is not meant to be discouraging or to attack. I am only trying to point the areas that need improvement in order to help.

Pros:

I really love the way you did the shading and lighting for this piece and the amount of textures you added to everything. From the jagged rocks, to the scales on the crocs, and the trees. The water especially is absolutely gorgeous! The way the light reflects off of the water makes it feel like I could almost feel it. The colors for this piece is incredible as well. It makes everything look very lush, while the added moss makes me feel the warmness of the jungle.

I also really like the textures you use for the both the birds and Daring Do's feathers. They look very fluffy and soft. The contrast you put into the shading and lighting really makes things pop, especially for Daring Do.

Cons:

There's a lot of major issues. The front of the hat is longer than the back and the top is way too high, it's looks a bit more like a cowboy hat then an explorer hat. But my main problems is with the anatomy. The neck is too thick and the torso area is really awkward. The chest is thick, but then it goes really inverted and then becomes thick again in the groin area. It goes out and in then out again (like a "W"). The face has its problems too. The lashes are sloppily done, despite the amount of detail put into the feathers and hair. But the facial structure is what really gets to me. The muzzle is too boxy, flat, and thick. If you look at a horses' face, their head is big but becomes thinner as it gets to the muzzle. Even the show's simplistic/cartoony anatomy is able to portray this. Like so:
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The crocodile's have some anatomy issues as well. For example, the front crocodile, the back leg is on backwards. The knee joint looks like it's pointing inwards rather then outwards or straight forward, and the leg is too short:
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Crocodile's also have five digits on their front feet, not four. The crocodile in the back has the curved neck of a dog or a cat. It's physically impossible for an adult crocodile's neck to bend that much. And, a crocs snout isn't so flat on the top, their mouths curve/slant in then curve up when it reaches its nostrils. The inside of their mouth isn't so flat either, it's very bumpy: s862.photobucket.com/user/wrat…

Also one last thing, the contrast in the lighting of the crocs is different then the rest of piece. The shadows aren't nearly as dark as everything else, so it draws my eyes towards them more then Daring Do, who should be the center focus.

Conclusion:

In short, your technique was beautifully executed and your background really stands out from the rest of the work you've created. Many people will draw their own rendition of a scene or landscape from an episode. But you created your own scenery and were able to execute it. However, the big anatomy issues made the piece feel wonky and really took me out of the scene. But, I can see how that would happen. Reptiles and horses have some pretty complex anatomy, and it could be tough to get the hang of it. I remember when I first started experimenting with reptiles and getting back into drawing horses after years of not drawing them, it was not easy. And even now I still have a tough time with certain poses every now and again. So don't be discouraged, study their anatomy (through pictures or even pause some videos/documentary scenes) and practice. Thank you for your time and consideration. :)
Soooo, I just got an email back from a DA staff. And it would appear that she deleted the SU Diamond Murals post:
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:icondarkprincess116: knew she was in deep shit and decided to just delete it before the DA staff got a hold of it in time to avoid any ramifications. Essentially, she got off scot-free. So be very careful and vigilant for her.
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